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BuyNowSellLater's avatar

This reads like grief had a fever dream and decided to speak in tongues. Unholy and gorgeous.

Saturnine Bile's avatar

What a beautiful thing to say. I’m speechless. Thank you, Allen. It truly means the world to me that you read it and that it took hold of you in that way.

Samara's avatar

So many excellent moments here, but I particularly liked “The hallway sucked back like skin peeled from meat—airless, red-thick silence. Nothing touched me. Not wind, not God”

Saturnine Bile's avatar

Thank you so much, Samara! <3 Your comment truly means a lot to me.

Lucy's avatar

oh i LOVE this! your writing is so beautiful!

Saturnine Bile's avatar

Thank you, Lucy <3

Your comment means so much to me.